We are learning to include some amazing adjectives and
powerful verbs.
The witch
Hunter:
The evil, ugly, wide eyed witch strolled down the path next
to the street. She was so mean looking my mum couldn’t look.
She passed me on my bike just the other day with her big,
bulging eyes and wrinkly skin. Just then I saw her skinny arms that looked like
sticks. She has a curved, bent back with knobbly teeth.
Braiden
The ugly, old witch has wrinkly skin, crooked teeth, a
sparrow on her gray hair and a grassy green cape. She has wide eyes, a weird
look, magical witch hands and a bad grin. Wow! She is creepy.
Deaglan:
The woman who was as ugly as a munted cactis came to school.
She has wrinkly skin and hands like sticks. She has disgusting grey hair.
Olivia Munro:
The wicked witch.
One day I was playing outside on my trampoline. Just then I
heard a noise. It flew down, down, down. It was a wicked witch. She had a pet
bird. The bird was as black as a stormy night.
Her eyes were as round as a bouncy ball. Her cape was as
green as grass and her hands like mud. She had gray hair. When she eats a
crawly her teeth were rotten. She hopped on her broom and zoomed as fast as a
scooter.
Macy:
The ugly witch came to Beachlands school. Her teeth were really dirty like mud. Her hair was as gray as a rainy day. her cloak was muddy, short and green from walking through the mud to school.
She made a short announcement. “The witches will conquer the world if you don’t stop littering.”
Then I just noticed how her spectacular, diamond and ruby eyes glowed. I ran home to tell my Dad and Mum to stop littering. The wrinkly witch appeared in my house. Her beautifully green cape twirled in the burning yellow light.
This time she had her black as night bird. “Arrr.” The bird squawked, “Arrr.” He snapped at me. “Arrr.” I screamed and jumped back and said, “There’s the witch. There’s the witch.”
And then my Dad came.
Madisyn:
The wicked woman has arms like sticks. She has a green cape with matching hat. She has grey hair and crooked teeth and shoes that look like hot dogs. She has an ugly face and looks evil and old too. She is off Brave the movie. I think she makes evil potions. She has a log house that looks like it will fall down.
Deaglan: In the weekend I went to Nixon’s house for four sleep overs. We played mine craft hunger games. Nixon and I were a team. We were looking for chests with food and dimensions. We won the hunger games so we had to verse each other. The next day we went ice skating for two hours and felt happy.
Macy:
In the weekend, my Dad, my Mum, my brother and me were
bored. My Dad went off fishing with his mate.
My Mum decided to call my Dad and ask him to bring home a
DVD because last Sunday we had watched the Hobbit 1. There was a dragon. It was
so so big. There were people that were so quick and they killed heaps of Orks.
They are the kind of thing that look like the ground and have a kind of moss
all over them.
Orks are baddies and drink dwarf blood. One dwarf gets shot
with a bow and arrow and his blood was poisoned. He couldn’t go on the trip.
The sun couldn’t set or rise. They couldn’t find the key hole.
It was …
